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Prepare: First, read the information on the Ashford Writing Center’s web page, Thesis Statements. Then, read the ENG125 Sample Literary Analysis. Pay close attention to the body paragraphs and thesis statements. Reflect: Compare your working thesis statement to the thesis statement in the sample Literary Analysis. Does your thesis address relevant points like the example thesis? Then, look at a body paragraph in the sample Literary Analysis. Compare its construction to a body paragraph in your own paper.
Write: Post your working thesis and your strongest body paragraph into the discussion by Thursday (Day 3) at midnight; do not attach it as a separate document. For the purposes of this discussion only, signify your working thesis by including it in bold type and italicize the topic sentence of your body paragraph. Your body paragraph should include at least three examples of paraphrases and/or quotations (there should be at least one of each) with correct citations in APA format. After the body paragraph, be sure to include reference page citations for the paraphrased and cited sources. Then, answer the following three questions: Explain the connection between the topic sentence and your working thesis. Would this connection be clear to someone without your explanation? If so, why? If not, how can you modify your topic sentence and/or thesis statement to make this connection more clear? Explain the choice of reference material. How do the references support the topic sentence? Would this connection be clear to someone without your explanation? If so, why? If not, what information should you add to the paragraph to make this connection more clear? Does the paragraph contain any unnecessary information? Does everything in it work to support the topic sentence? What information could be added or removed? In essence, you are being asked to evaluate the cohesion of your paragraph. Note any other specific challenges faced or successes experienced when writing this paragraph or completing this discussion post. Respond to Peers: Be sure to respond to at least two of your classmates’ posts by Sunday at midnight. In your responses, post at least 100 words and evaluate your colleague’s paragraph and/or self-evaluation. Do you agree with his/her responses to the questions? What else could he/she do to develop stronger body paragraphs?
Paper For Above instruction
The discussion task assigned by Ashford University involves a comprehensive reflection on the process of developing an effective body paragraph and thesis statement within the context of literary analysis. It emphasizes critical review of sample materials, introspective comparison of one’s work with exemplary models, and peer evaluation to enhance writing coherence and analytical clarity. The purpose is to guide students in crafting well-structured paragraphs that clearly support their thesis statements, supported by proper citations, and to reflect on the strengths and weaknesses of their writing process.
Specifically, students are instructed to read Ashford’s resources on thesis statements and examine a sample literary analysis to understand the construction of effective body paragraphs. The core activity requires students to post their working thesis and strongest body paragraph by Thursday midnight, with the thesis highlighted in bold and the topic sentence of the paragraph italicized. The paragraph should contain at least three properly cited paraphrases or quotations supporting the topic sentence, all referenced in APA format. Students should then respond to three reflective questions: the clarity of the link between thesis and paragraph, the appropriateness and supportiveness of the references, and the cohesion of the paragraph—what to add or remove for improvement.
Additionally, students are encouraged to evaluate their peer’s posts, providing constructive feedback to promote better paragraph development and analytical clarity. The activity aims to foster critical thinking about paragraph structure, citation practices, clarity in argumentation, and peer-supported improvement, which are vital skills in academic writing and literary analysis.
References
- Ashford Writing Center. (n.d.). Thesis Statements. Ashford University. https://academicguides.waldenu.edu/writingcenter/thesis
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