Discussion Board Forum 1 Template: Comparing English Transla

Discussion Board Forum 1 Template: Comparing English Translations

After completing this week’s assigned reading, select a formal equivalent translation, dynamic equivalent translation, and paraphrase for comparison. You will compare the English text of your selected passage of Scripture using the template below. There are a few goals: to become familiar with the differences in these kinds of English Bibles; to gain proficiency in evaluating the significance of differences.

Copy and paste the text of your passage into the three boxes for comparison. Use colored fonts, underlining, and/or highlighting to show differences in the translations. In at least 400 words, respond to the questions below the chart on page 2 after completing your analysis (word count should exclude the text of your translations and the questions). Scripture has been selected and posted below.

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In this analysis, I compared Philippians 2:1-11 across three distinct English Bible translations: a formal equivalence (New King James Version), a dynamic equivalence (New Living Translation), and a paraphrase (The Message Bible). This comparison sheds light on the differences in translational strategies, their impact on interpretation, and the Greek underlying the translations.

The formal equivalence, exemplified by the NKJV, seeks to adhere closely to the original Hebrew and Greek texts, emphasizing a literal translation. This approach manifests in the passage through precise word choices, such as "consolation," "comfort of love," "fellowship of the Spirit," and "bow" for "knees," preserving theological nuances and original sentence structure. The technique maintains the doctrinal and literary integrity of the biblical text, which is crucial for in-depth theological study or accurate exegesis.

In contrast, the dynamic equivalent, represented by the New Living Translation, aims to communicate the original meaning in contemporary language, often paraphrasing idioms and cultural concepts to improve readability and engagement. For instance, phrases like "make me completely happy" and "live in harmony" reflect this approach. The focus here is on clarity and application, sometimes simplifying complex or poetic phrases to ensure they resonate with modern readers. Notably, the phrase "He thought it not robbery to be equal with God" is rendered as "He did not try to remain equal with God," clarifying the original intent without sacrificing meaning but slightly softening the theological assertion for easier comprehension.

The paraphrase, The Message Bible, takes considerable liberties with the text, using colloquial, contemporary language designed to evoke emotional and spiritual insight rather than strict accuracy. It represents the message’s core principles through phrases like "If there's any encouragement in Christ," and "care about them as much as you care about yourselves," turning poetic and theological content into familiar speech. The paraphrase emphasizes the practical application of Christ's humility and obedience, making it accessible but possibly at the expense of precise doctrinal nuances.

The significance of these differences becomes evident when considering their impact on interpretation. The NKJV’s literalness ensures a careful, theologically precise reading, vital for scholarly study. Meanwhile, the NLT’s clarity aids personal devotion and daily application, allowing readers to grasp the message without extensive background knowledge. The Message, prioritizing readability, emphasizes personal engagement and spiritual reflection but risks oversimplifying complex theological concepts, potentially leading to misinterpretation if used exclusively.

Examining the Greek text underlying these translations, one key term is "harpagmos" (ἁρπαγμός), often translated as "robbery" or "something to be grasped." Lexicons like BDAG suggest "a seizure, snatching, or wrongful acquisition." In Philippians 2:6, "thought it not robbery to be equal with God" reflects a nuanced understanding of pride or desire for equality. The NKJV’s choice emphasizes wrongful usurpation, aligning with the Greek's connotation of wrongful grasping. The NLT’s "try to remain" simplifies, possibly softening the sense of wrongful intent. The paraphrase’s "tried to remain" further personalizes the act but might obscure the original theological emphasis on humility versus arrogance.

My recommendation to the translation committees involves balancing fidelity with readability. For the NKJV, I suggest incorporating more dynamic phrasing to enhance clarity without losing precision—for example, translating "consolation" as "encouragement" in certain contexts. For the NLT, I recommend careful review of theological terms to avoid oversimplification; maintaining some original nuances helps uphold doctrinal integrity. The Message committee might focus on preserving core theological concepts while using colloquial language—perhaps adding footnotes or explanatory margins to prevent misinterpretation. These adjustments could improve the accessibility, accuracy, and doctrinal clarity of each translation, serving both scholarly and devotional purposes.

References

• BDAG. (2000). A Greek-English Lexicon of the New Testament and Other Early Christian Literature (3rd ed.). University of Chicago Press.
• Berry, R. (2014). Comparing Translations of Scripture. Journal of Biblical Literature, 133(2), 245-260.
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