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(1) In 1956, Elvis made his network television debut with the first of his six appearances on stage show, a weekly variety program hosted by Tommy and Jimmy Dorsey. (2) He followed these with two appearances on The Milton Berle Show, the second of which included a performance of "Hound Dog" that was so provocative (for that time, anyway) that it caused a national scandal. (3) Graceland, Elvis Presley's home and refuge for twenty years, is one of the most visited homes in America today, now attracting over 600,000 visitors annually. (4) It is also the most famous home in America after the White House. (5) In 1991, Graceland Mansion was placed on the National Register of Historic Places. adapted from Which sentence contains a capitalization error? sentence 1 sentence 5 sentence 2 sentence 4
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The task involves identifying a sentence with a capitalization error within a provided paragraph discussing Elvis Presley’s television debut and the significance of Graceland. The paragraph contains five sentences, each discussing different aspects related to Elvis Presley’s career and legacy. The focus here is on analyzing sentence five, which states: “In 1991, Graceland Mansion was placed on the National Register of Historic Places.”
Examining sentence five, it appears grammatically and stylistically correct at first glance. It begins with "In 1991," which is appropriate since it indicates the year of an event, and the phrase "Graceland Mansion" correctly capitalizes the proper nouns—'Graceland' and 'Mansion.' The phrase "was placed on the National Register of Historic Places" follows standard capitalization conventions for the United States National Register of Historic Places, which is a proper noun and should always be capitalized. The sentence is clear and well-structured, with no immediate errors related to capitalization.
Turning to sentence one: “In 1956, Elvis made his network television debut with the first of his six appearances on stage show, a weekly variety program hosted by Tommy and Jimmy Dorsey.” The phrase "stage show" does not contain a proper noun and therefore is correct in lowercase. The rest of the sentence is free of issues.
Sentence two reads: “He followed these with two appearances on The Milton Berle Show, the second of which included a performance of "Hound Dog" that was so provocative (for that time, anyway) that it caused a national scandal.” The proper noun "The Milton Berle Show" is correctly capitalized, and the rest are common nouns or phrases that do not require capitalization.
Sentence four states: “It is also the most famous home in America after the White House.” Here, "White House" is a proper noun and correctly capitalized, and "America" is also correctly capitalized as a proper noun. No errors are present.
Given the analysis, the question about the capitalization error suggests that the likely answer is sentence five. However, upon inspection, sentence five appears accurate in its capitalization conventions. On closer scrutiny, the phrase "National Register of Historic Places" is consistently capitalized as it is a proper noun.
In fact, the potential error may stem from a common misconception regarding the capitalization of "Mansion" in "Graceland Mansion." When used as part of the official name, "Graceland" is the primary proper noun, and "Mansion" might be considered a common noun unless officially named "Graceland Mansion." Nonetheless, the phrase "Graceland Mansion" can be considered acceptable if it is treated as an official name or specific designation. The same applies to the phrase “National Register of Historic Places,” which is the full proper name of a federal listing, and is correctly capitalized.
Therefore, the sentence with the potential capitalization error, based on conventional rules, would be sentence four, which states: “It is also the most famous home in America after the White House.” All terms are correct, but some question arises on whether "home" should be capitalized. Since "home" is a common noun, unless part of a title, it remains lowercase, and thus no error exists here.
Alternatively, considering the provided options, the intended answer is sentence five. It maintains correct capitalization and is factually accurate, but the question implies an error exists, possibly a trick or a misunderstanding. Given all standard grammatical and capitalization rules, none of the sentences clearly contain a capitalization error. However, because sentence five begins with 'In 1991,' starting with a preposition, and the phrase “Graceland Mansion” is seen as proper, the only potential error I can find, based on the options provided, could be with sentence one if “stage show” were mistakenly capitalized or treated as a proper noun, which it isn't.
In conclusion, after thorough examination, there isn't an obvious capitalization mistake in any of these sentences as they are written according to standard conventions. Yet, if the question insists on a specific sentence, the most plausible choice would be sentence five, given the consistent capitalization of "National Register of Historic Places". Nonetheless, none of the options clearly contain an error, indicating perhaps the question might be testing attention to detail. If one must select based on potential mistakes, the safest answer aligning with common misconceptions is sentence five, perhaps mistakenly assuming "Mansion" should not be capitalized. To adhere to precise rules, no sentence contains a capitalization error.
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