Instructions Sheet 1: Journal Assignment Guide

Instructionssheet 1this Journal Assignment Allows You To Reflect On Th

This journal assignment allows you to reflect on the feedback you received in Writers’ Workshop 1. The purpose is for you to identify what feedback was helpful and what feedback was not, based on what you received from your peers and your instructor, and to explain why. The journal also gives you an opportunity to articulate how you will use the feedback to expand and deepen the story you decide to develop this term. Reflect on feedback you have received from your peers and instructor, earlier resources offered in the modules, and your own self-analysis of your writing pieces. What has or has not been helpful in developing your stories?

Determine from your two story pitches which one you would like to develop further as your final piece of nonfiction. (PITCH 1- Attached) Describe how you will incorporate feedback or how you will revise less effective passages in order to develop this piece for final submission. Analyze what nonfiction-specific techniques you had the most difficulty adapting to your writing and how you can improve in that area. What was the most helpful part of the peer review process, and what was the most frustrating part? What did you find personally useful about providing actionable recommendations concerning the effectiveness of structure in the work of your peers? For additional details, please refer to the Final Project II Milestone One Guidelines and Rubric document in the Assignment Guidelines and Rubrics section of the course.

Paper For Above instruction

The narrative titled "The Four Hits Off the Fence" is about a pivotal day in 1995 that introduced the author into the Rossiano family through a friendship with Mark, whose full name hints at his mixed Italian and African American heritage. The story explores themes of friendship, cultural identity, family bonds, and resilience, emphasizing Mark's devotion to his family and his ability to navigate complex relationships and life challenges.

Revising this story involves clarifying its central theme and ensuring that the story’s structure effectively conveys Mark’s multifaceted character. The feedback from peers highlighted the need for a more explicit connection between the story's title and its content, prompting the author to deepen the thematic coherence. Specific passages describing Mark's personality, his family’s dynamics, and his personal struggles can be enriched with detailed dialogue, vivid descriptions, and contextual background to foster reader engagement.

Incorporating the feedback, I would focus on strengthening the narrative clarity by explicitly stating the story's main theme—such as resilience, cultural identity, or the importance of family—and aligning the story's events to support this theme. For example, elaborating on Mark's role as a protector and guiding figure for his nephews and daughter can reinforce the themes of sacrifice and perseverance. Similarly, clarifying Mark’s background—specifically which parent is African American and which is Italian—can add depth to his character and create a more nuanced portrait.

Adapting nonfiction-specific techniques, such as using sensory details, active voice, and direct quotations from interviews or personal writings, has been challenging but essential for making the story compelling. Engaging with Mark’s poetry and writings, and incorporating interviews with family members, will provide authenticity and emotional resonance. However, it can be difficult to balance factual accuracy with narrative flow, and I aim to improve by practicing detailed source integration and avoiding overly expository passages.

The peer review process proved most helpful when reviewers pointed out unclear passages and suggested concrete ways to enhance character development and thematic focus. Conversely, the most frustrating aspect was receiving vague or overly critical feedback without constructive suggestions. Providing actionable recommendations about story structure and character portrayal was personally useful in developing a more cohesive and engaging narrative, as it encourages specific revisions rather than vague critique.

Overall, this reflective process underscores the importance of clear thematic articulation, detailed character portrayal, and strategic use of nonfiction techniques. By addressing peer feedback thoughtfully and refining my writing, I aim to craft a vivid, heartfelt memoir that honors Mark’s legacy and resonates with readers interested in cultural stories and personal resilience.

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