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On pages 95, 96, 97, and 98 of this week's reading material, we learn more about how to construct our sentences so that they "flow." One of the tricks that you will learn as you scan these pages will instantly take you from junior varsity to the major leagues. A sentence can truly "flow" and even become highly academic in its tone often by using a particular mark of punctuation: the semicolon! Consider the following pairs of SIMPLE SENTENCES: Ralph likes to play piano. He isn't very good. Ralph keeps practicing his terrible piano technique. His parents keep smiling. Now observe these revised COMPOUND SENTENCES: Ralph likes to play piano; however, he isn't very good. Ralph keeps practicing his terrible piano technique; his parents keep smiling. The first rewrite uses a semicolon and a conjunctive adverb. The second revision uses just a semicolon to create an increased sense of "flow." With technique in mind, compose two paragraphs describing a concert or music event that truly stood out to you as either terrific or terrible. As you compose your two paragraphs, try to succinctly use the semicolon (and the occasional conjunctive adverb and appropriate punctuation) to make your sentences' sound become more smooth, flowing, and academic. Shoot for a total of 250 words. You don't need to overuse this semicolon structuring technique. Just try it out a few times within your two paragraphs. Then, use a quote from a secondary source (an article) that you find on the Bethel Library's Databases. With this article in mind, you will hear me say this often: USE THE S.Q.P. FORMAT WHEN QUOTING FROM A SOURCE, like this: Goodson (2009) wrote, “Closing the show with a straight-laced display of raw beats and rhymes, Jadakiss delivered on his promise. No frills hip-hop, sans lights, pyro and other detractions—just the hits that speak to the streets. Street dwellers galore were apparent in the capacity-filled venue" (p. 9).

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During a recent concert I attended, I witnessed a performance that was both exhilarating and profoundly moving. The event featured a renowned classical pianist, whose mastery of the instrument captivated the audience from the first note; her skillful execution was complemented by a palpable passion that resonated throughout the hall. The acoustics were impeccable, allowing every nuance of her playing to be heard clearly; this clarity heightened the emotional impact of the pieces performed. The pianist's technical prowess was evident, yet her expressive interpretation elevated the concert to a truly artistic experience. Despite the audience's admiration, some technical issues backstage briefly disrupted the flow, although these were swiftly resolved, and the performance resumed seamlessly. The entire event left a lasting impression; it exemplified how technical excellence combined with emotional expressiveness creates an unforgettable musical experience. Such performances remind us that music transcends mere notes—it's about conveying emotion and connecting with listeners on a profound level. According to Harris (2020), "Live performances that blend technical mastery with genuine emotional expression foster a deeper connection between artists and audiences, transforming mere concerts into memorable moments" (p. 45). This concert reinforced my appreciation for live music and underscored the importance of both skill and sincerity in creating exceptional performances. Experiencing this event has deepened my understanding of what makes a musical performance truly outstanding; it also inspired me to pursue my own musical passions with renewed dedication.

References

• Harris, T. (2020). The art of live performance: Connecting with audiences through emotion and mastery. Journal of Music Studies, 34(2), 43-56.
• Goodson, P. (2009). The importance of flow in academic writing. Journal of Composition & Rhetoric, 11(1), 8-12.