Outline A Conflict That You'll Develop

Outline A Conflict That Youll Devel

This week your journal entry will outline a conflict that you’ll develop into a short story. This will be the basis for the Fiction Project that you'll work on over the course of the quarter, so take some time to think about what you'd like to write about. Before beginning this assignment, review the various types of conflicts here: Types of Conflict. You might also want to try out some of the "random plot generators" that writers use to get fresh ideas! A list of links can be found here: Story Generators. When writing in your journal, always take the time to include details, colors, feelings, and action.

Below are two examples; the first is weak, the second is stronger:

Weak Journal Entry: "Two girls went to the mall and encountered a scary man." That is too general. You want a journal entry with more detail, with description, dialogue, emotion, detail, action, and conflict.

Stronger Journal Entry: "Jen and Bethanny made their weekly pilgrimage to Spring Hill Mall last Saturday night, but had the scare of their lives when an accidental bump in the food court introduced a new wrinkle into their evening. Clad in a dark coat, now dripping with gravy, the unintended target was unforgiving and stalked the young girls through the JC Penney and Forever 21 with the cold, dark stare of a hunter determined to bag his game. Giving him the slip required not only tenacity, but teamwork that only true BFFs could muster."

Now see what you can come up with...

Paper For Above instruction

For this journal assignment, I will outline a central conflict that I plan to develop into a short story. This initial outline will serve as the foundation for my fiction project over the course of the quarter. I have selected a conflict that involves both internal and external struggle, providing ample scope for character development and tension.

The core conflict I envision revolves around a young protagonist, Elena, who discovers a mysterious map hidden within an old family heirloom. The map hints at a hidden treasure buried somewhere in her small town. Elena’s initial excitement quickly clashes with the growing fears and obstacles she encounters—an ominous stranger shadowing her movements and threatening to claim the treasure for himself. As Elena navigates this dangerous quest, she must decide whether to pursue her desire for adventure or protect her family secrets that are also at stake.

This conflict involves elements of suspense and mystery, with external dangers posed by the stranger and internal dilemmas about loyalty, fear, and curiosity. The story will explore themes of heritage, bravery, and the importance of intuition in dangerous situations. I plan to enrich the narrative by incorporating vivid descriptions of the setting—an old town with forgotten alleyways and hidden corners—and detailing Elena’s emotional reactions, from her initial thrill to her growing anxiety and resolve.

By developing this conflict in my story, I hope to engage readers with a compelling blend of suspense, relatable characters, and evocative imagery. This outline will grow as I brainstorm supporting characters, specific plot points, and the resolution of the conflict, all based on the initial elements I’ve described here.

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