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I’m a Canadian and I’m Applying for U.S. Citizenship Maya Kachroo-Levine November 10, 2016 I’ve lived in the U.S. for 23 years, but I didn’t vote in this election. I’m a green card holder, and I was planning to apply for citizenship this year. The naturalization process takes a considerable amount of time (six months at minimum, but often much longer), so by the time I was able to apply, the turnaround time wouldn’t have allowed me to vote in this election. Rather than submitting my application anyway, I decided to wait and ensure the Election Day results went the way I wanted. I joked with my family that I’d submit my citizenship application on Nov. 9, when I knew it was safe. Well, Nov. 9 has come and passed. And I don’t know that it’s safe. Now that Donald Trump is the President-elect, I’m faced with the question: do I still want to become a citizen of the United States of America? I was born in Canada, and I came to the U.S. when I was 2. I currently hold a Canadian passport, and I am working on becoming an Overseas Citizen of India (my mother was born in India and a lot of my family still lives there). I would never relinquish my Canadian passport, a decision I made long before Canadian citizenship became a hot commodity. On the night of the election, the Canadian immigration website crashed, likely a result of frantic voters typing “how to move to Canada” into Google. As someone who has (willingly) been the butt of Canadian jokes for 20 or so years, you’d think I’d feel at least a twinge of validation that people are now desperately flocking to my birth country. I don’t. It just feels overwhelming and disheartening. I love living in the U.S. I was raised in this country. I was educated—kindergarten through college—in the U.S. When people ask me where I’m from, I don’t say Canada or India; I say I’m from Boston. I am (probably) here to stay. As much as moving back to Montreal has crossed my mind lately, most of the people I love are in this country, including my immediate family, my boyfriend and my closest friends. If I’m going to stay, if I’m invested in the U.S. political system, and if I’m eligible to become a citizen (because I’ve now held a green card for five years), it’s time to exercise that privilege. I know what it’s like to enter the green card lottery year after year, be a slave to my visa, and become an all-too-regular face at my local immigration office. It’s frustrating, time-consuming and often degrading. I’ve finally come far enough to qualify for citizenship, which is a privilege I am incredibly fortunate to have, and one that I know millions of immigrants are fighting for. But if I apply for American citizenship tomorrow, I will end up saying the naturalization Oath of Allegiance under President Trump. I will attend my oath ceremony in a room filled with framed photos of our 45th president—a man who has faced multiple sexual assault accusations and threatened to deport millions of immigrants. And to me, that is heartbreaking. Because on a night that I thought would boost our shared faith in this country, my trust and hope were broken instead. There is now a large part of me that feels like I should wait until our President-elect is out of office before I apply to become a citizen. But I think it’s more important that I work hard to become an American so I can participate in the next election. This is not how I wanted to feel when I submitted my naturalization application. I planned to feel energized and hopeful, instead of terrified. I wanted to submit my application with pride, instead of in a hurry because I honestly don’t know what’s going to happen to immigration laws in this country. This President-elect has verbalized his intentions to make strict immigration crackdowns. Conceivably, in the Trump era, I could be stopped in the street as a non- white person and asked to produce proof of residency. As much as I detest that part of my hurry to apply for citizenship will be because it may get more challenging after Jan. 20, that is the reality we are now facing. I feel a sense of urgency to become a citizen, which I think I’ve always felt, but I also feel something new: dread.

Paper For Above instruction

This essay offers a compelling personal narrative that explores the intersections of immigration, citizenship, identity, and political change in the United States. The author reflects on their upbringing as a Canadian-born individual who has lived in the U.S. for most of their life, holding a green card, and contemplating naturalization amidst the shifting political landscape. The narrative effectively communicates the emotional and political complexities experienced by immigrants, especially in the context of the 2016 U.S. presidential election that resulted in Donald Trump's election as president.

The central thesis of the essay revolves around the author's internal conflict between their desire to participate fully in American democracy through naturalization and their emotional response to the political climate under President-elect Trump. The author underscores the significance of citizenship as a privilege gained through years of legal struggles, while simultaneously expressing concern about the potential hardships and discriminatory policies they anticipate could be enacted under the new administration. The essay vividly depicts how political events influence personal decisions, emphasizing the intertwining of individual identity with national politics.

The support for the thesis is primarily drawn from personal anecdotes and reflections, such as the author's experience of entering the green card lottery repeatedly, the hesitation to apply for citizenship due to political fears, and the symbolic impact of the presidential election on their sense of security and belonging. These narratives are well-crafted to evoke empathy and provide context for the author's internal dilemma. The descriptive detail about the Canadian immigration website crash and the framing of the oath ceremony offer poignant images that reinforce the emotional tone of the essay.

Organization-wise, the essay follows a clear chronological progression, beginning with the author's background, moving through their decision-making process leading up to the election, and concluding with their current emotional state and future considerations. This structure effectively guides the reader through the complexity of the author’s experience, allowing for a deeper understanding of the stakes involved in their decision to pursue citizenship.

However, while the essay succeeds in presenting a vivid personal perspective, it could benefit from deeper analysis of broader themes such as the role of immigrant identity within American political institutions, the historical context of immigrant voting rights, and the impact of political rhetoric on immigrant communities. Expanding these discussions would strengthen the critical engagement and elevate the essay from personal reflection to a more comprehensive exploration of the subject matter.

Overall, the essay demonstrates a strong emotional and intellectual engagement with the topic, successfully communicating the personal and political tensions faced by immigrant individuals contemplating naturalization in a polarized political environment. With additional analysis of the larger societal implications, the essay could achieve greater depth and scholarly insight into the broader significance of citizenship for immigrant experiences in the United States.

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