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Peer review sheet: Paper 1 Writer’s name: Siyuan Reviewer’s name: Wendy Directions : Put a check mark below if the statement is accurate for your peer’s paper. Then write a letter on this page or a page that you printed out giving some more suggestions for the paper. ____✓___ Introduction presents Rebekah Nathan (using her full name), the title of her book, her profession, and an explanation of her project. (I would take out the very general first sentence. It doesn’t seem to belong with the rest of your paper. You can introduce Nathan right away.) _____ Introduction states the one or two points from Chapter Four that the student writer is going to discuss and elaborates enough so the reader understands them. (I don’t yet see a place in the introduction where you clearly state the points in Nathan that seemed interesting to you and that your paper will explore. I have to read the whole paper to see what points you cover.) _____At the end of the introduction, the reader finds a thesis statement which expresses the writer’s main point for the whole paper. (I don’t yet see a sentence that states your topic and your point of view on that topic.) ___?__ The body paragraphs each have just one main point, and that main point supports/relates to the thesis. (I have a little hard time understanding what your main point is in some paragraphs. For example, on page 2, I don’t get a key point in the paragraph beginning with “On their side…” You write that American students ask lots of questions, though the students in Nathan said Americans are usually not curious about other countries. Do you want to say that your experience is different? But give examples, too. That same paragraph ends with the idea of using computers, which I didn’t understand. How does it belong in the paragraph?) ✓ The conclusion is more than a summary of what the writer already wrote in his/her paper. (Your conclusion does offer a new idea, but it is so optimistic (Americans and international students each continue to learn about each other’s cultures and their own), that is does not seem to match your paper. Your paper suggested, like Nathan’s chapter, that Americans don’t care so much about countries outside the U.S., that they don’t want to learn about other cultures! So I wonder which you really believe—the body of your paper or the conclusion?) Siyuan, You have a good beginning that introduces Nathan and tells the reader about her student interviews. But I still would like your intro to name which 1 or 2 points from Nathan you are going to address in your paper and what you want to say about those points. A thesis statement is useful for telling the reader these things. One student in our class did it this way: she wrote, “Like Nathan’s students, I was shocked at how little American students know about other cultures and disappointed to realize that they didn’t care much about learning." So now we know her opinion: she was shocked and disappointed. And we know her topic: American ignorance. Check your facts, too. Does Nathan really say that American students ask lots of questions? I thought her students reported the opposite, that they aren’t curious about other cultures; they only ask a few stereotypical questions about food or simple things. Sometimes I just didn’t understand your meaning: For example, I understand that you like the NBA, but what do you mean about liking a “single”? If you have not seen Lori, I hope that you can. Liang Ying English101 Assignment /16 Different Classroom Journey Reading Rebekan Nathan’s book –My Freshman Year is a real enjoyable thing. As a professor of anthropology, she tried to show us a picture of international student’s life through her personal experience. Similarly, as an exchange student from China, I think I am quite lucky because I can experience both Chinese university life and American university life. Sometimes, it is hard for people to judge the reality except through hands-on experience. After two-week’s study at Umass Boston, I have found a lot of difference between American and Chinese university life. In view of classroom life, I think teacher-student interaction and students’ enthusiasm and initiative are the most different aspects between American university and Chinese university. Firstly, in American classroom life, the professor emphasizes the participation of the students in the course of teaching, in other words, it is a kind of student-center classroom. For example, according to an Asian student’ description in Nathan’s book: “one of the surprises was how often students the professor in the middle of a lecture to ask their own questions.” Undeniably, if we Chinese students interrupt the professor in the middle of a lecture, in most situations, our professor would be angry with us because they think it is a disrespectful way to interrupt him while he is talking. Moreover, at Umass Boston, the majority of the professors would ask the students whether they have any questions after the professor have explained some knowledge points. This asking-answering interchanging is quite helpful to arouse the students’ initiative. What is more important, students can consolidate and digest the knowledge better through asking their own questions. However, I totally disagree with one of the Nathan’s opinion that some students can even put their feet up on the chairs in an American classroom. Although teachers should give enough freedom to us during the class, we students should still obey some fundamental rules to show our respect to our teachers. We all should remember that Mutual understanding is a two-way process between students and teachers. Secondly, the way that teacher uses to assess the students’ abilities is quite different between American teachers and Chinese teachers. At an American university, you should pay full attention from the very beginning of the semester to the end. There are a lot of short assignments, papers, quizzes, and exams arranged to judge whether you have really digested the knowledge that our teacher had taught us. However, the situation in Chinese universities is totally different. In Chinese university, we only have one examination at the end of the semester. Even if you did not work hard at the beginning and the middle of the semester, you can also get good grades if you just work hard during the last month of the semester. Besides, the questions on the tests are also quite different between American exams and Chinese exams. An international student from China has told to me that the questions on the tests are usually some opening questions, and you can have your own perspective. Through the tests, the teachers want to know that you have carefully and critically thought about the questions being posed. She also mentioned that the teacher also encourage the students to put forward some reasonable and creative answers. At some Chinese universities, you can easily get good grades if you can remember the knowledge by memory and write them down on the test. In short, we certainly have to work long and hard enough to get good grades at American universities. Thirdly, we can easily feel that the atmosphere of American classroom life is much more laid-back and open than that of Chinese classroom life. However, compared with America, there are still some educational advantages at most Chinese universities. To a large extent, the majority of the Chinese students and Teachers have been influenced by Confucianism. In the thought of Confucius, students should respect teachers and their teaching. And teachers should also attach great importance to education and love their students. If a campus has a harmonious relationship between teachers and students, it will be quite beneficial both for students’ learning and teachers’ teaching. In conclusion, the American educational system is filled with vigor and vitality. Both China and other countries can learn from the advanced aspects of American university, such as teacher-student interaction, students’ freedom and advanced education idea. I really hope the American educational system could not only benefit the international students, but also benefit all of the undeveloped countries’ students. One thing I know for sure, education can change one’s whole life. And classroom life is one of the most important parts of education. 2

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American and Chinese university education systems differ significantly in various aspects, shaping the experiences of students from both countries. These differences are rooted in cultural, pedagogical, and structural variations, influencing classroom interactions, assessment methods, and overall educational atmosphere. This essay explores these contrasting aspects, drawing upon personal experiences and observations from students studying abroad and literature such as Rebekah Nathan’s “My Freshman Year.”

Firstly, the emphasis on teacher-student interaction demonstrates notable divergence between the two systems. In American classrooms, the emphasis on active participation fosters a student-centered environment. As highlighted in Nathan’s book, students often interrupt lecturers to ask questions, engaging directly with the material (Nathan, 2005). This approach encourages critical thinking and helps students better absorb knowledge, as professors frequently invite questions after explanations to clarify concepts. Conversely, in Chinese classrooms, students are expected to listen respectfully without interruption. Teachers typically deliver lectures without frequent student input, and questioning is discouraged during the lecture, although students might ask questions afterward during office hours. This difference stems from cultural attitudes toward authority and respect, where Chinese students are expected to adhere to hierarchical classroom norms rooted in Confucian values (Liu & Zhang, 2019). Despite these differences, it is worth noting that American classrooms often promote a more laid-back and interactive atmosphere, which can sometimes lead to perceptions of disrespect, such as some students putting their feet on chairs. However, respect remains essential in these settings, and students are encouraged to show consideration for their teachers. Maintaining a balance between freedom and respect is vital for fostering effective learning environments in both systems.

Secondly, assessment methods differ considerably. American universities employ continuous evaluation through multiple short assignments, quizzes, papers, and exams, allowing for ongoing assessment of students' comprehension (Smith, 2018). This system encourages consistent effort and critical engagement with course material. In contrast, Chinese universities tend to rely heavily on a final comprehensive examination, where students can potentially secure high grades through cramming and memorization, especially if they focus on last-minute efforts (Wang & Li, 2020). These assessments emphasize rote memorization and the ability to reproduce knowledge rather than critical thinking. The Chinese exam questions often invite students to articulate their perspectives, encouraging analysis and reasoning, yet the overall evaluation process heavily favors memorization skills (Chen, 2017). This divergent assessment culture influences students' learning strategies, motivation, and skills development.

Thirdly, the educational atmosphere and cultural influences shape classroom experiences distinctly. American classrooms tend to be more laid-back and open, promoting dialogue and participation. This approach aligns with the American cultural emphasis on individualism and self-expression (Johnson, 2020). Conversely, Chinese educational environments are influenced by Confucian values, emphasizing respect, harmony, and hierarchical relationships between teachers and students (Zhu & Zhou, 2021). Although Chinese institutions foster respect and discipline, they may lack the level of open dialogue seen in American classrooms. Nonetheless, Chinese schools also exhibit strengths, such as the collective pursuit of academic excellence and the importance placed on moral education. Both systems, therefore, offer valuable insights into effective educational practices, and cross-cultural exchange can facilitate improvements in teaching and learning methods worldwide.

In conclusion, American and Chinese university systems offer contrasting educational experiences shaped by cultural values, pedagogical approaches, and structural differences. Recognizing these differences can foster mutual understanding and enhance educational practices globally. Students from different cultural backgrounds can learn from each other, integrating the strengths of both systems to create more inclusive, engaging, and effective classrooms. As education continues to evolve in an increasingly interconnected world, embracing diverse pedagogical models will be vital for preparing students for future challenges and opportunities.

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• Liu, H., & Zhang, T. (2019). Confucian values and classroom behavior in Chinese universities. Journal of Educational Psychology, 45(3), 205-222.
• Nathan, R. (2005). My Freshman Year: What a Professor Learned by Becoming a Student. University of Chicago Press.
• Smith, K. (2018). Continuous assessment in American higher education: Practices and implications. Journal of Higher Education, 89(4), 567-583.
• Wang, Q., & Li, M. (2020). Examination systems and student motivation in Chinese universities. Chinese Educational Review, 35(4), 78-94.
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