Read This Handout From The Writing Center At The University

Readthishandout From The Writing Center At The University Of North Car

Read this handout from The Writing Center at The University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill. Select one of the options: Narrative or Description, and begin to tell your Miami Story. Focus on capturing a moment in detailed, vivid language, utilizing the rhetorical structures you have learned. If choosing the Narrative option, tell a story of significance to your family or personal experience involving Miami. The story should be presented as a scene, a moment-to-moment account including setting, dialogue, gestures, names of people and places, and sensory details.

For example, if telling "How you or your family came to Miami," describe the scene where the journey began, including the time of year, weather, location, and the sensations experienced. Incorporate dialogue between people, their gestures, and specific details about the place and time. Specify the year, season, and atmosphere, and avoid summarizing—aim to recreate the moment as if it is happening in front of the reader.

If describing "My first time in Miami," craft a scene that vividly recounts that memory with specific details about the arrival, the environment, and your impressions. Mention the address, physical description, sounds, colors, and names of places or people involved. Share your age, the season, weather, and a particular moment that stuck with you, allowing the story's significance to emerge naturally from the narration.

Alternatively, if choosing "What it's like to live in Miami now," portray a scene that captures everyday life—sounds, sights, conversations, gestures—set in a specific season, year, and weather. Use dialogue and actions to bring the scene to life, helping the reader visualize the environment and the people within it.

Remember, the story can be a memory, a narrated incident, or a story told by someone else. Focus on the scene—location, time of day, season, gestures, dialogue—and keep your tense consistent. Create a cinematic, on-the-scene moment that immerses the reader in your Miami story through detailed description and vivid action.

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My first memory of arriving in Miami is etched vividly in my mind—a hot summer afternoon in July 2005. I was just nine years old, and I remember how the sun blazed relentlessly while our car slowly navigated the labyrinth of Miami streets. The air was thick and humid, carrying the scent of salt and tropical foliage. My family, tired but excited, sat packed in the cramped vehicle, with my mother at the wheel, her brow furrowed as she glanced at the GPS, trying to find our new home.

We finally pulled up in front of a pastel-colored apartment building on Little Havana’s Calle Ocho. The building was modest but vibrant, with peeling paint and a small balcony overflowing with potted plants. I could hear the lively hum of street vendors, the distant laughter of children playing, and the faint salsa music wafting from a nearby open window. As we stepped out, my father took a deep breath, and I could see the grin on his face as he surveyed the neighborhood. "Bienvenido a Miami," he said softly, gesturing toward the bustling street.

We entered the apartment, which was small but filled with warm light streaming through the windows. The walls were covered with colorful murals, and the floor creaked under our feet. I remember standing by the window, pressing my hand against the glass as I looked out at the street below—a mosaic of vibrant storefronts, street vendors shouting, and people greeting each other in rapid Spanish. This was our new home, and I felt a mixture of curiosity and apprehension. Even at that young age, I sensed this city was alive, bursting with energy and stories waiting to unfold.

Living in Miami now, years later, I still encounter scenes that remind me of that first day. I often walk along the same streets, hearing the same lively chatter, smelling the rich aroma of Cuban coffee from corner cafes, and seeing murals that echo the vibrant spirit of the community. Miami’s sensory tapestry—its colorful architecture, diverse languages, and dynamic culture—continues to shape my identity. Whether it's the gentle breeze off Biscayne Bay or the rhythmic beat of salsa music in Little Havana, the city’s essence remains vivid and compelling, a permanent part of my story.

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