Revised Articulation Of Response And Feedback
Revised Articulation of Response and Feedback
The following need to be revised Articulation of response 7/17/2015 ARTICULATION- The discussion regarding the data breach at VL Bank is generally organized. Awkward sentence construction, incorrect word choices, and writing convention errors persist limiting the effectiveness of the author's intended responses. Criterion Score: 1.00 Comments on this criterion: 7/17/2015- The appropriate academic tone is established throughout the work. Several instances of awkwardly constructed sentences, incorrect word choices, and errors in editing and grammar disrupt the clarity of the writing. A few representative examples of the articulation errors noted are included in the attached document. A1a. Legal Jurisdiction Criterion Score: 1.00 Comments on this criterion: 7/17/2015 - The response briefly states that the GBI and FBI would be involved; additional discussion for how the bank will work with these bodies of law enforcement is needed. A1b. Legal Considerations Criterion Score: 2.00 Comments on this criterion: 7/17/2015 - The response discusses ways to catalog and record the digital evidence and briefly states that "it is vital for investigators to take additional measures to verify the integrity of the information." Please revise to specifically discuss those additional measures; discussion of additional considerations for preparing and handling digital evidence is needed. A1c. Coordination Criterion Score: 1.00 Comments on this criterion: 7/17/2015 - The response briefly states that the CISO needs to coordinate with the bank's lawyer. Please revise to provide specific coordination that should take place between the CISO and VL Bank's lawyer. A2a. Technology Criterion Score: 1.00 Comments on this criterion: 7/17/2015 - The submission discusses authentication devices as well as IDS/IPS and firewalls. Explanation of the firewall is provided, but it is not clear how it could prevent the crime in the scenario. Explanation of the authentication device could not be located, therefore it is not clear how it could prevent the specific crime. Please revise to recommend technology and include explanation for how it can prevent the crime in the scenario. A3. Controls Criterion Score: 1.00 Comments on this criterion: 7/17/2015 - The response recommends an IDS and IPS, these are examples of technology solutions, however the response needs recommendations for controls that the bank could implement. Please revise to recommend specific controls that the bank could implement that would mitigate the impact of future attacks. Points for participation in our conversation of the Discussion Questions will be awarded as follows. Each week I’ll supply a Discussion Question(s) in a forum on the Discussion Board where we can informally talk about them. Points will be assessed on each of your 3 single best posts of the week according to the following rubric. 0 points 4 points 8 points 10 points No post at all. Post indicates you were present but doesn’t add value to the discussion or demonstrate understanding of the course material. Post indicates active engagement with the material and does not repeat comments posted by another student. Note: definitions and examples copied from the text or other sources are helpful but fit in this category for grading purposes. Post indicates active engagement with the material and does not repeat comments posted by another student. In addition, the post correctly describes and/or applies the mathematical theory using correct terminology and/or techniques in the student’s own words. Let’s talk about what I’m looking for in terms of active engagement for just a moment. Comments such as “That’s so true” or “I agree with you” are indications you are in the discussion but not indications you are actively involved. These would count for 2 points. Comments that are meaningful and advance the conversation demonstrate active engagement. These would be ones that share your own response to the original discussion question; ask a question to clarify another classmate’s response; respond to someone else’s question; or add to someone else’s thought. For example, the following response would advance the conversation. “You are correct that average sales would be of interest to the company.” While this could be pertinent to the conversation, it doesn’t indicate understanding of the statistical concepts and would receive 4 points. To receive the full 5 points, you would need to post something like the following. “Your example of how the mean can be used to get a sense of the average sales generated by a salesperson makes sense to me. What I don’t understand is what the median would tell us about the individual sales in this data set. Can anyone explain this in more detail?” This example shows active engagement and also demonstrates the correct use of the concepts under discussion. EVERYONE MUST HAVE A TOTAL OF AT LEAST 3 POSTS PER WEEK. Your first post is due by Day 3 in response to the question “Weekly Experiment and Discussion - Part 1 - Due by Day 3”. The other 2 posts must be in response to a classmate and/or additional questions that I may post titled “Weekly Experiment and Discussion - Part 2 - Due by Day 7.” Your initial post to Part 2 must be submitted on or before Day 5 and the follow-up post to Part 2 must be submitted on or before Day 7. You will earn a maximum of 30 points for each week.
Paper For Above instruction
This paper critically evaluates the process of responding to a data breach at VL Bank, emphasizing the importance of organizational, legal, and technological considerations in managing cybersecurity incidents. Effective articulation, precise legal cooperation, digital evidence handling, and implementation of robust controls are essential in addressing such breaches while preventing future occurrences.
Firstly, clear articulation is vital for effective communication during cybersecurity incidents. As noted in the initial critique, ambiguous or poorly constructed sentences can undermine the clarity of responses and responses' overall effectiveness. In academic and professional communication, precision in language helps convey complex ideas clearly, which is crucial when discussing sensitive issues like data breaches. For instance, explaining how the Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI) and Georgia Bureau of Investigation (GBI) collaborate with VL Bank requires detailed discussion of jurisdictional roles and procedural cooperation, beyond mere mentions of their involvement.
Legal jurisdiction plays a critical role in cybersecurity responses. When a financial institution such as VL Bank experiences a data breach, coordination with law enforcement agencies like the FBI and GBI is necessary. Proper legal procedures include establishing jurisdiction, understanding time constraints, and ensuring that evidence collection adheres to legal standards. Digital evidence handling must involve specific measures to verify the integrity of data, such as cryptographic hashing, secure storage, and chain of custody documentation. These practices ensure the evidence remains admissible and credible in legal proceedings. Moreover, effective coordination between the Chief Information Security Officer (CISO) and legal counsel is fundamental. The CISO should work closely with the legal team to define the scope of investigation, legal compliance, and reporting requirements, ensuring a unified response.
Technological measures are fundamental in preventing and responding to cybercrimes. Authentication devices, Intrusion Detection Systems (IDS), Intrusion Prevention Systems (IPS), and firewalls are among the technological defenses that can be deployed. Firewalls act as barrier filters to control incoming and outgoing network traffic, thus preventing unauthorized access. Authentication devices (such as biometric systems or hardware tokens) provide additional layers of security, ensuring that only authorized individuals can access sensitive systems. It is critical to recommend technologies not merely in theoretical terms but with specific applications to the scenario, detailing how they can thwart particular types of attacks. For example, implementing multi-factor authentication can significantly reduce the risk of unauthorized access that leads to data breaches.
Controlling cyber risks involves establishing comprehensive security controls. These controls include technical solutions like IDS/IPS, but also procedural policies, user training, and incident response planning. The bank should adopt controls such as regular vulnerability assessments, employee awareness programs, and strict access controls. These controls mitigate the impact of attacks, facilitate early detection of breaches, and streamline incident management. Tailoring these controls to the specific threats and vulnerabilities identified in the bank’s infrastructure enhances their effectiveness and creates a resilient security posture.
In conclusion, responding effectively to a financial institution’s data breach demands clear articulation, legal coordination, robust technological defenses, and comprehensive controls. These elements work synergistically to manage current incidents and prevent future cybersecurity threats, safeguarding assets and maintaining trust with clients and stakeholders. As cyber threats evolve, ongoing assessment and enhancement of these strategies remain imperative for effective cybersecurity resilience.
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