The Creative Assignment Is In Two Parts: Pastiche Or A Style

The Creative Assignment Is In Two Parts1a Pastiche Or A Stylisti

The Creative Assignment is in two parts: (1) a "pastiche," or a stylistic imitation of another text. You will choose a work by one of the poets we are reading, and then identify one or more elements of the work to transform in some way; write your own poem, modelled after the original text. Your imitation, or pastiche, need not be longer than a page or two. Also, notice that in a sense you will "copy" the original, but since you are changing content and overall form, it is not at all "plagiarism." You will have broad creative latitude in the design and direction of your pastiche. (2) I will not directly grade the Pastiche (imitation) itself (though it must be "sincerely attempted"). Instead, I will grade the accompanying Defense: a description of the process you followed, and of the outcome.

Use these bullet points in developing your Defense (perhaps one paragraph per bullet point): · A detailed explanation of your choice for the primary text you have imitated · A definition of the particular elements you tried to imitate · A description of the creative process you followed · An account of the challenges you encountered, and how you dealt with them · Your own opinion of the resulting imitation · A summary of the resulting insights regarding the primary work, and creative effort in general · Put a page break after your Pastiche, then start the Defense on a new page. Put both in the same file. The Defense should be around 600 words, minimum. Take a look at the sample Pastiche & Defense assignments I have provided. They are on the Lectures and Announcements forum. Essentially, this is an exercise in analysis but from a different angle. You need to identify specific formal and thematic characteristics of a text. But then, you will attempt to transfer a few of them to a text of your own creation. Take a look at how Raleigh responds to Marlowe -- see "A Passionate Shepherd to His Love" and "The Nymph's Reply to the Shepherd.

Then, look at a poem like "Those Winter Sundays" by Robert Hayden. Among many other characteristics, it presents a male speaker who tells of a father, somewhat strict and disciplined, with whom the speaker, now probably an adult and the father perhaps dead, had a troubled, uncommunicative relationship. You can create a poem that will also remember back to a recurring, that is, habitual, experience with your father or mother, or a grandparent, or some other authority figure (you can vary the basic elements); you will perhaps try as well to capture the split consciousness: the earlier lack of appreciation, the present tone of regret; and you might also carry over some of the other, more formal devices: the use of sounds to capture some psychological aspect of the person or situation (notice the "k" sounds in the Hayden poem), or the concluding question ("What did I know, what did I know?") that also includes some key word of double significance ("office," that is partly religious and partly about the disciplined, dutyful matters the son remembers of his father.

Everything else in your poem will be your own, although you might perhaps borrow elements from yet another poem or story. But there is a great deal of flexibility (that is, creativity and responsibility) in the way you choose what elements to imitate. You could imitate, or even copy verbatim, a crucial (or concluding, or initiating) line or two from a text, but change almost everything else. From Hayden's poem, you might borrow only the memory of a recurring domestic experience, and perhaps the regretful (or other emotional) rhetorical question at the end. But your speaker might be the father, or the wife, or an outside observer -- that's up to you.

We don't even need to see overt connections between your text and the primary, imitated text -- although I expect you to let me know in your defense what text you worked from. Many writers start by imitating a beloved (or a challenging, or infuriating) primary text, and end up with something no longer recognizable as a pastiche at all. All writers would most likely trace at least some aspects of their writing, and many of their works, to something they read and were struck by (positively as well as negatively). If you work with a story, most likely your piece will be fragmentary, or at least a short-short story. You might focus on a passage demonstrating dialogue, character description, climactic conflict, interior monologue, setting of scene, or something else specific.

But again, the choice is yours. The grade will be based on how well you write, and on how fully and insightfully you present the description of your process in the Defense. You should submit the finished Creative Assignment as one file electronically via the "Assignments" tool on the Eagle Online web site. No late submissions will be accepted unless you communicate with me and receive approval. I recommend saving your work regularly as you work on the computer; print out a hard copy for yourself when you submit the project to me.

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For my pastiche, I chose to imitate William Carlos Williams' poem "The Red Wheelbarrow" because of its simplicity, vivid imagery, and profound thematic undercurrent despite its brevity. Williams’ poem is renowned for its minimalism, focusing intensely on an image—the red wheelbarrow—with little overt explanation or narrative context. I aimed to emulate these stylistic elements: concise language, stark imagery, and the lingering significance of the everyday object. Williams employs a free form with short, deliberate lines, creating a rhythm that emphasizes each image and word, which I tried to replicate in my own poem by maintaining a sparse, economical style. My poem depicts an everyday scene at a rural farm, emphasizing simple objects and their weighty symbolic meaning, much like Williams’ focus on the wheelbarrow.

The creative process began with an analysis of Williams’ poem, paying close attention to its form, tone, and thematic resonance. I identified his use of concrete imagery and minimal diction, which invites the reader to find greater significance in ordinary objects. I then brainstormed common, rural scenes from my own experience—such as an old barn, a weathered tractor, or a quiet pond—and selected imagery that was visually vivid yet open to interpretation. I drafted multiple versions, refining the language to match Williams’ precise, almost cliché-like simplicity, while striving to imbue the scene with emotional or symbolic weight. Key to this was balancing clarity with ambiguity, allowing the scene to be both specific and universal.

One of the primary challenges was capturing the essence of Williams’ brevity while making the scene resonate with my personal experience. His poem’s power lies partly in the stark, unadorned language, which leaves room for multiple interpretations. Maintaining that economy while infusing my poem with enough detail to make it genuine was difficult. Additionally, ensuring that my lines stayed rhythmic and visually balanced, echoing the visual layout of the original, tested my skills in poetic compression. I overcame these challenges by reading my drafts aloud, breaking down sentences into their core images, and removing any superfluous words that did not serve the image or tone.

Overall, I am satisfied with the resulting imitation. It successfully captures the visual simplicity and contemplative tone of Williams’ poem while reflecting my own rural background and personal perspective. The imagery feels authentic, and the minimalism underscores the importance of ordinary objects in shaping our worldview. I believe this exercise deepened my appreciation for Williams’ layered use of language—how economy can create depth—and highlighted the importance of precise diction in poetry. It also made me more conscious of the deliberate choices poets make regarding form, imagery, and tone in emphasizing their themes.

Through this process, I gained insights into how formal elements—such as line length, imagery, and layout—are essential tools in shaping a poem’s mood and message. I also learned how to analyze a text not just for its content but for its stylistic devices and how to emulate these effectively. I realized that pastiche is not merely copying but an exercise in understanding and transforming, which broadens both analytical and creative skills. This project strengthened my ability to pay attention to detail and to think critically about the relationship between form and meaning in poetry, skills that I will carry forward into my future writing and literary analysis.

References

• Williams, W. C. (1917). The Red Wheelbarrow. Poetry Magazine.
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