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Tobacco Use/Smoking Status Update: Human Resources periodically must ask employees about whether they use tobacco. What is a change in tobacco usage? You either stopped using tobacco or started using tobacco in the last year. For purposes of life insurance, a non-smoker/tobacco user is defined as someone who has refrained from using tobacco products or has successfully completed a tobacco cessation program in the last 12 months. Employees’ smoking/tobacco use status is recorded in Lawson, our payroll/personnel system.
If you have supplemental insurance coverage, the use of tobacco increases your rates. How does my tobacco use status affect my supplemental life insurance rates? Rates are determined based on your tobacco use and age. Your rate will be adjusted to reflect your current tobacco use status. It is vital that your records accurately reflect your appropriate status.
When would my supplemental rates change? The update is effective for the year 2009, so the rates will change with the first pay in 2009. The rates are set for the whole year and will not be adjusted again until 2010. Your tobacco use status will carry over from 2008 to 2009. If you have the same status as last year, you do not need to do anything!
If you have changed your tobacco use status – you quit tobacco use or restarted using tobacco since last year – you will need to notify Wendy Anthony via email of your change in status. She will update your status in Lawson. This notification is due by October 9, 2008. Also, if you have a dependent spouse covered on the supplemental life insurance plan, you need to change his/her status if his/her tobacco use has changed in the last year. Please email me or Wendy Anthony if you need additional information.
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Regarding the communication to employees about tobacco use and insurance, the letter is written in a direct order, providing clear instructions and details sequentially. It opens with pertinent information about tobacco use status updates, states how tobacco use influences insurance rates, specifies the timeline for rate adjustments, and explains the notification process for those who need to update their status or that of their dependents. The structure aims for clarity and straightforwardness, typical of a direct order, ensuring employees understand what actions they need to take and deadlines involved.
Analysis of the Order Method
The communication is in the direct order, which is appropriate for informational and instructional messages such as this, where clarity and prompt action are essential. It provides concrete information upfront, followed by necessary procedures and deadlines, facilitating immediate understanding and compliance. I agree with this approach because it ensures that the employees receive information in a logical, easy-to-follow manner that emphasizes the importance of timely responses.
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Updated Tobacco Use Status and Insurance Rates for 2009
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Subject: Important: Update Your Tobacco Use Status for 2009 Insurance Rates
Dear Team,
This message is to remind all employees of an important update regarding tobacco use and its impact on your insurance rates. Human Resources regularly reviews tobacco use status to ensure accurate records that influence life and supplemental insurance premiums.
If your tobacco use habits have changed in the past year—whether you have quit or started using tobacco—you are required to notify us by October 9, 2008. This allows us to update your status in our Lawson system, which impacts your insurance rates starting with the first paycheck of 2009. If you did not change your tobacco use since last year, no action is needed.
For employees with dependent spouses on the supplemental plan, their tobacco status must also be updated if it has changed. Correctly reflecting these statuses is crucial because tobacco use increases premium rates—determined based on age and tobacco use—therefore, accurate data is essential for fair billing.
Please send your tobacco status updates via email to Wendy Anthony or myself. Providing accurate information ensures that your insurance premiums are correctly calculated for the upcoming year. Should you have any questions or need further information, do not hesitate to contact us.
Thank you for your cooperation.
Sincerely,
Human Resources Department
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