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Choose ONE of the two cases below. You must use the correct business letter format (heading, inside address, correct margins, and so on) shown in Chapter 14 of the Markel text. For content, use the indirect bad news structure I have given you in the IEEE article and online lecture.
1-Herman Schmelling has just received a "very poor" performance evaluation after two years with your company. His first two evaluations were above average in every area except "professional development." After the second evaluation, you advised him to attend professional workshops, seminars, and conferences, and to become more active in professional organizations. As far as you can see (documented company records and your discussion with Ms. Laurel Jenkins, his immediate supervisor, on June 10, 2010), he has done nothing to increase his professional development, and now his latest evaluation indicates that he is below the average in all categories.
Herman is a technical writer with a B.S. in technical communications and a minor in business management. You think that you want to keep him on staff but you need improvement in all phases of his work, but you must have his performance back up to its earlier (2011 & 2012) above-average or better standards. Structure a message that gives him the bad news about his evaluation and informs him that he must improve or be fired. Also inform him that he is now on "probation" and will be re-evaluated in three months, at which time he will be fired if he has not made satisfactory improvement in all areas. Using the indirect bad news structure, write a one-page letter to Mr. Schmelling.
2-A junior engineer, Terry Smith, whom you hired, came to you last week with a request for a 20 percent salary raise. In your office, his tone was professional and assertive, and he was not “demanding,†although you could see in his eyes that he was extremely serious about receiving a sizeable raise. He cited his excellent work record and unsolicited client letters commending his performance. His performance evaluations bear out the fact that he's a topnotch performer and hard worker.
The problem is, you do not have the amount he wants allocated for your next budget that comes out January 1, 2013, mainly because the salary increases were calculated back in June 2012. The next raise cycle will not be until next June, although you know that you have a certain “slush fund†available for company emergencies. Part of your mental challenge with this case is to decide if this valuable young engineer’s request now constitutes an emergency for you and the company. In addition, if you approve the 20-percent raise, he would be the highest paid engineer in his section, which includes three engineers who have been with the firm 10 years or longer. They also are topnotch professionals with many award-winning projects.
He has been with you for four years. You must explain to him that you can't give him the entire raise he asks for, and yet you definitely want to keep him with the company. Write a letter to him explaining why you can't give him the entire raise, but you can offer him a smaller raise: this smaller amount would have to be parceled out over the next six months as your business cycles into next year’s evaluation of salary increases. You are the top executive with the company, and the board of directors is aware of Mr. Smith’s growing professional reputation and value (but most board members have great loyalty to the other three engineers with company seniority).
Paper For Above instruction
The task at hand is to craft two distinct business letters employing the indirect bad news structure, one addressing Herman Schmelling’s poor performance evaluation, and the other responding to Terry Smith’s salary increase request. Each letter must adhere strictly to business formatting standards and should be compelling, clear, and professional in tone and structure, reflecting an appropriate understanding of the scenario and the audience involved.
Firstly, the letter to Herman Schmelling must communicate the unfavorable evaluation subtly, emphasizing the need for immediate improvement while maintaining a supportive tone that encourages reform within a probationary period. It should start with a positive acknowledgment of his past performance, outline specific deficiencies, and clearly state the consequences should improvements not occur within three months.
Secondly, the letter to Terry Smith should tactfully decline his request for a 20% raise, explaining budgetary constraints while acknowledging his contributions. The message should underscore appreciation for his work, clearly communicate the reasons why the full raise can't be granted immediately, and propose a phased increase over six months aligned with performance and company budget cycles.
Both letters should employ courteous, professional language, avoid directness in delivering bad news, and inspire continued motivation and engagement. The correspondence must be free of errors, well-organized, and precisely follow the business letter format, including proper salutations, inside address, body paragraphs, and closing statements.
Paper For Above instruction
Letter to Herman Schmelling:
[Your Name]
[Your Position]
[Company Name]
[Company Address]
[City, State, ZIP]
[Date]
Herman Schmelling
1234 Elm Street
Cityville, ST 56789
Dear Mr. Schmelling,
I hope this message finds you well. I want to acknowledge your dedicated efforts over the past two years, particularly your contributions as a technical writer. Your educational background and your previous evaluations reflect your potential and commitment to professional growth.
However, after our recent review and considering the documented company records and discussions with Ms. Laurel Jenkins, it appears that your recent evaluations indicate that your performance has fallen below the standards we previously celebrated. Despite the guidance provided earlier regarding attending professional development activities, it seems that there has been limited progress in this area.
Given these circumstances, I must inform you that your current performance level necessitates immediate and sustained improvement across all areas. To support you in this endeavor, we are placing you on a probationary status effective immediately. You will be re-evaluated in three months, and I encourage you to utilize this period to demonstrate significant advancement in your professional development and overall performance.
Please understand that should satisfactory progress not be evident within this timeframe, the company will need to reconsider your employment. Our goal is to see you return to the above-average standards of 2011 and 2012, which you previously achieved. I am confident in your abilities, and I hope you will view this probation as an opportunity to excel once again.
Should you have any questions or wish to discuss your improvement plan, please feel free to contact me directly.
Sincerely,
[Your Name]
[Your Position]
[Company Name]
Letter to Terry Smith:
[Your Name]
[Your Position]
[Company Name]
[Company Address]
[City, State, ZIP]
[Date]
Terry Smith
5678 Maple Avenue
Businesstown, ST 78901
Dear Mr. Smith,
I appreciate the opportunity to meet with you last week and to discuss your recent request for a salary increase. Your professionalism and confidence, coupled with your impressive work record and the unsolicited positive feedback from clients, demonstrate your valuable contribution to our team.
As you are aware, the next budget cycle begins on January 1, 2013. Unfortunately, due to the timing of the previous salary calculations back in June 2012, we are currently constrained by the allocated funds for salary increases. Additionally, the upcoming formal salary review is scheduled for June 2013, and the financial framework does not presently accommodate the 20 percent increase you requested.
Nevertheless, I want to reaffirm the company’s recognition of your growing professional reputation. While we cannot grant the full increase immediately, I am pleased to offer a smaller, phased increase that will be implemented over the course of the next six months. This approach aligns with our business cycle and budget planning, allowing us to reward your excellent performance while maintaining fiscal responsibility.
We value your dedication and want to ensure your continued growth within the company. I believe this phased approach will serve as a meaningful step forward, and I am optimistic about your future prospects with us.
If you have any questions about this plan or wish to discuss further development opportunities, please feel free to contact me directly.
Sincerely,
[Your Name]
[Your Position]
[Company Name]
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