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For this journal entry, read and reflect upon "Food as Thought: Resisting the Moralization of Eating" by Mary Maxfield (They Say, I Say, Ch. 20). Identify the conversation Maxfield is participating in about food, politics, and culture. Use the templates learned (including the 'Template of Templates') to write a reflective journal entry responding to the text.

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Introduction and Summary of Maxfield's Argument

In "Food as Thought: Resisting the Moralization of Eating," Mary Maxfield intervenes in debates that link personal eating choices with moral value, social identity, and political responsibility. Maxfield resists a one-dimensional moralization of diets—where particular foods or eating patterns (e.g., veganism, locavorism, low-carb) are equated with virtue—and calls for a more nuanced conversation that accounts for structural forces, cultural meanings, and plural ethical concerns (Maxfield, n.d.). Her key move is to push back against binary moral claims and to reframe eating as a complex intersection of personal, social, and political factors rather than solely an index of moral worth.

The Conversation Maxfield Joins

Maxfield joins a broad interdisciplinary conversation about food politics, moral discourse, and culture that includes scholarship in food studies, public health, environmental science, and sociology. This conversation asks: To what extent should individual food choices be framed as moral acts? Who benefits when diet is moralized? How do class, race, gender, and access shape both choices and judgments? Maxfield aligns with critics who caution against individualizing systemic issues (Rose, 1999) and those who highlight the role of political economy and inequality in shaping food environments (Guthman, 2011; Nestle, 2013). At the same time, she dialogues with popular authors who emphasize ethical eating (Pollan, 2006) and with scientific accounts that document the environmental impacts of diets (Poore & Nemecek, 2018).

Key Claims and Rhetorical Position

Maxfield's claims include: (1) moralizing eating simplifies complex ethical terrain and often produces social shame rather than systemic change; (2) moralization ignores structural constraints—such as food deserts, economic precarity, and cultural traditions—that shape what people eat; and (3) productive dialogue should balance individual responsibility with social justice and policy-level thinking. Rhetorically, she uses concessive moves (they say many diets are moral, I say moralization is reductive) and invites a synthesis: recognizing diet as ethically significant but refusing simplistic moral judgments (Graff & Birkenstein, 2010; Maxfield, n.d.).

Applying "They Say / I Say" Templates

Using templates from They Say / I Say clarifies Maxfield's stance. A useful template: "Although some critics argue that X (e.g., adopting a particular diet) is a clear moral good, Maxfield counters that Y (moralization) occludes context and reinforces inequality." Another template—"Both X and Y are true"—allows a balanced claim: both individual dietary choices matter and structural reforms are necessary. These templates help draft responses that concede legitimate concerns (environmental harms, animal welfare) while refuting sweeping moral judgments that ignore context (Chatzidakis et al., 2007; Rozin, 1999).

Reflection: Personal and Cultural Implications

Reading Maxfield prompted reflection on moments when I, or people I know, judged others' diets without attending to context. The text encouraged empathy and curiosity: asking why someone eats a certain way (economic constraints, cultural practice, access) instead of assuming moral failure. It also pushed me to consider how media and market forces commodify ethical eating, turning virtue into a consumer choice accessible primarily to those with resources (Nestle, 2013; Guthman, 2011).

Maxfield's argument also reframes political engagement. If eating is framed solely as a personal moral crusade, collective solutions such as food policy reform, school nutrition programs, agricultural subsidies, and urban planning receive less attention. A balanced approach recognizes the ethical dimensions of individual choices (e.g., climate consequences of food) while advocating for systemic interventions that enable equitable access to healthier and more sustainable options (Poore & Nemecek, 2018).

Using the "Template of Templates" for an Academic Response

Adapting the Template of Templates: begin with "They say..." to summarize dominant claims (e.g., 'they say' veganism is morally superior), follow with "I say..." to articulate my stance (e.g., I say moralizing diets risks shaming and obscures inequity), and close with "This matters because..." to draw implications for classroom dialogue and civic action. This structure ensures clarity and rhetorical balance and mirrors Maxfield’s call for nuanced debate (Graff & Birkenstein, 2010; Maxfield, n.d.).

Conclusion and Actionable Takeaways

Maxfield's essay contributes a corrective to polarizing conversations about food by insisting that moral language be used with attention to complexity. The takeaway is both rhetorical and practical: rhetorically, practice templates that facilitate fair-minded disagreement; practically, pair individual ethical commitments with advocacy for policies that reduce inequity in the food system. Doing so honors ethical concerns—animal welfare, public health, environmental sustainability—without turning eating into a moral litmus test that isolates, shames, or oversimplifies (Pollan, 2006; Rose, 1999).

References

• Maxfield, M. (n.d.). "Food as Thought: Resisting the Moralization of Eating." In They Say / I Say, Chapter 20. (Original chapter referenced for this reflection.)
• Graff, G., & Birkenstein, C. (2010). They Say / I Say: The Moves That Matter in Academic Writing. W.W. Norton & Company.
• Pollan, M. (2006). The Omnivore's Dilemma: A Natural History of Four Meals. Penguin.
• Nestle, M. (2013). Food Politics: How the Food Industry Influences Nutrition and Health (3rd ed.). University of California Press.
• Guthman, J. (2011). Weighing In: Obesity, Food Justice, and the Limits of Capitalism. University of California Press.
• Poore, J., & Nemecek, T. (2018). Reducing food's environmental impacts through producers and consumers. Science, 360(6392), 987–992.
• Chatzidakis, A., Hibbert, S., & Smith, A. P. (2007). Why people don’t take their concerns about fair trade to the supermarket. Journal of Business Ethics, 74(1), 89–100.
• Rose, N. (1999). Governing the Soul: The Shaping of the Private Self. Free Association Books.
• Rozin, P. (1999). The process of moralization. Psychological Science, 10(3), 218–221.
• Bisogni, C. A., Sobal, J., Connors, M., Devine, C. M., & Sayer, R. (2009). Constructing food choice decisions. Annals of Behavioral Medicine, 38(Suppl 1), S37–S50.