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Handout created by Justine White & Mary Wood The English Corner at Richland College Writing a Counterargument and Refutation Successful academic writers understand the importance of acknowledging multiple points of view in their work. While it may seem that introducing other views could weaken an argument, the best writers acknowledge many opposing views and then prove them wrong. Introducing counterarguments and refutations is a great strategy for making your argument stronger and your essay more developed (and longer!). A counterargument is a view that is different from your own. You may see words like opposing viewpoint, opposition, objection, and naysayer; these are all terms for a counterargument.

When you insert a counterargument into your argument essay, you are essentially making a preemptive strike by anticipating objections that an opposing side might bring up and exposing their weaknesses. Successful counterarguments always include a refutation. A refutation or rebuttal is a paragraph that comes after the counterargument and disproves it. In other words, the refutation paragraph explains why the opposing view is incomplete, problematic, or simply wrong. Organizing a Counterargument Paragraph Similar to the argument paragraph, a counterargument paragraph has four parts: the topic sentence, the supporting evidence, the explanation, and the conclusion.

The difference between the argument paragraph and the counterargument paragraph is word choice and tone. The argument paragraph uses persuasive words and a persuasive tone, whereas the counterargument uses a neutral tone and qualifying words to let the reader know that you disagree with the view. Qualifying words are words that clearly indicate the opposition or give the sense to the reader that not everyone believes this view. Words like some, claim, contend, object, or disagree are qualifying words. The following is a template with appropriate words to help you build your counterargument paragraph.

Each sentence is numbered in the order it should appear in your counterargument paragraph. 1. Topic sentence: States a claim that opposes your view. You should begin with a transition that shows contrast: however, nevertheless, on the contrary, on the other hand. Follow your transition with a noun such as critics, opponents, some, or naysayers.

Use a verb that shows that this is a claim or an opinion: argue, claim, contend, believe, object, disagree, or dispute. a. Transition + noun + verb + that + argument against your thesis. Example: However, some critics contend that marijuana is a gateway drug and therefore should not be legalized. OR Handout created by Justine White & Mary Wood a. Transition + it is argued that + argument against your thesis.

Example: On the contrary, it is argued that marijuana is a gateway drug and therefore should not be legalized. 2. Explanation sentence: This sentence explains (if necessary) the claim in the topic sentence. You do not always need it. 3.

Evidence: This sentence provides supporting evidence for the opposition. It can be a quote or a paraphrase from an expert. It might be anecdotal evidence (a personal story from someone), an example, or statistics. Be sure to include the name of the author and his or her credibility (title, credentials, experience) when you introduce a quote. Follow your quote with a correct citation, usually the page number.

4. Explanation of evidence: This sentence, or sentences, explains the supporting evidence. 5. Concluding sentence: This sentence, or sentences, states what conclusion the reader should come to when he or she considers the claim of the counterargument and the evidence supporting it. Here is a model counterargument paragraph.

The qualifying words are in squares, so you can identify them. Each sentence is numbered according to the template above. 1. Nevertheless, those who oppose marijuana legalization claim that marijuana is a gateway drug. 2.

They believe that once someone tries marijuana, he or she will then move on to harder, more dangerous drugs and become an addict. 3. According to Stacey Sugar, the clinical director at the Towson-based Maryland Addiction Recovery Network, “marijuana could be a gateway drug for some, but not everyone, and that a lot depends on the user and whether they are predisposed to addiction…Marijuana is the easiest drug to get a hold of after alcohol and cigarettes, and some of those who like a marijuana high may be more interested in trying other highs†(qtd. in Synder). 4. Her claim is that addicts may want to try other highs beyond marijuana, and those drugs could potentially have more devastating and addictive effects.

5. In other words, critics of marijuana legalization believe that once a person feels the altered experience of marijuana, he or she will want to experience the increased sensations of dangerous, potentially life-destroying and addictive drugs such as cocaine or methamphetamines. Organizing an Refutation Paragraph The refutation paragraph is your chance to say why the opposition in the paragraph above is incorrect. You must prove your naysayer wrong with provable, logical evidence. It is important to include a source in your refutation in order to be credible.

Be sure to use strong persuasive language when moving into your claim(s) about why the opposition is incorrect. The following is a template with appropriate words to help you build your refutation paragraph. Each sentence is numbered in the order it should appear in your refutation paragraph. 1. Opening sentence: This sentence summarizes the opposing view from the paragraph above and acknowledges the objection.

Use the words may or some to indicate that you disagree with the view. a. It may be true that + paraphrase the objection. Example: It may be true that some people use marijuana as a gateway drug to move onto harder, more dangerous drugs. 2. Topic sentence: This sentence states your reason why the objection is wrong.

It is in the form of a claim and begins with a transition. Some good transition words are however, Handout created by Justine White & Mary Wood nevertheless, nonetheless, but the truth of the matter, contrary to this opinion, or despite this idea. a. Transition + reason why the objection is wrong. Example: Yet contrary to this opinion, marijuana is not the first addictive substance that users initially try. 3.

Expert evidence sentence: This sentence supports the claim in your topic sentence. It can be a quote or paraphrase from an expert, statistics, surveys from credible organizations, governmental information, etc. Be sure to include the name of the author and his or her credibility (title, credentials, experience) when you introduce a quote or paraphrase. Follow your quote with a correct citation, usually the page number. 4.

Explanation of evidence: This sentence, or sentences, explains the supporting evidence. 5. Second evidence: If you have another expert or supporting evidence to support your refutation, put it here. 6. Second explanation: This sentence, or sentences, explains your second supporting evidence.

7. Concluding sentence: This sentence, or sentences, answers the so what, who cares, why does it matter questions. It is your chance to give your opinion about the topic. Furthermore, be sure to refer back to the thesis statement from your introduction. Here is a model refutation paragraph.

The qualifying words are in squares, so you can identify them. The transitions are bolded. Each sentence is numbered according to the template above. It may be true that some people use marijuana as a gateway drug to move on to harder, more dangerous drugs. 2.

But the truth of the matter is that marijuana is not the first addictive substance that users initially try. 3. “A study published in the peer-reviewed Journal of School Health has concluded that the theory of a gateway drug is not associated with marijuana, but rather one of the most damaging and socially accepted drugs in the world, alcohol†(Scharff). 4. In other words, alcohol is the drug and high that influences people to try harder, more addictive substances.

Alcohol is the drug that the government should be focusing on. Alcohol is the drug that needs more intervention. 5. Furthermore, the gateway theory deteriorates when one considers that drug dealers do not work at 7-11. 6.

If a person purchases marijuana in a safe, structured location like a convenience store instead of a back alley, there is no drug dealer to influence the purchaser to try other more dangerous drugs like cocaine or heroin. 7. In reality, alcohol should be the focus of reform and recovery programs, and making marijuana legal will eliminate the gateway theory entirely.

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In academic writing, effectively incorporating counterarguments and refutations significantly strengthens an essay by demonstrating a comprehensive understanding of the issue and an ability to engage critically with opposing views. This process entails acknowledging contrary opinions and systematically demonstrating why they are flawed or less compelling than one's own argument. The strategic use of counterarguments and refutations not only enhances the credibility of the writer but also persuades the reader by illustrating that the writer has thoughtfully considered multiple perspectives before arriving at a conclusion.

Constructing a compelling counterargument involves presenting the opposing view with neutrality and clarity. Writers should begin by clearly stating the opposing claim, often using neutral or qualifying language to avoid appearing overly dismissive. Transition words such as "however," "on the contrary," or "nevertheless" are effective in signaling a shift to the opposing viewpoint. The claim itself should be supported by evidence, which can include expert opinions, statistical data, or anecdotal examples. For instance, critics of renewable energy often argue that it is unreliable and too costly to implement nationwide. They might cite studies or expert opinions claiming that renewable sources cannot currently meet the energy demands of large populations (Smith, 2018).

Following the presentation of the opposing view and evidence, the writer's task is to explain the limitations or flaws of this perspective. This explanation could involve pointing out the outdated nature of the evidence, highlighting technological advancements, or emphasizing counter-evidence from credible sources. Continuing the previous example, the writer might note that recent advancements in solar and wind technology have drastically reduced costs and increased efficiency, rendering earlier criticisms obsolete (Johnson, 2020). The goal in this section is to show that the counterargument, while valid in some contexts, does not adequately challenge the strength of the writer's thesis.

Next, a well-crafted refutation directly challenges the opposing view by providing compelling, evidence-based reasons why it is incorrect or less convincing. A refutation paragraph should open by acknowledging the validity of some elements of the opposing view but then present strong rebuttals supported by credible evidence. For example, a writer might argue that although renewable energy has costs, the long-term economic benefits and environmental advantages outweigh the initial expenses (EPA, 2019). Incorporating statistical data, expert testimony, or authoritative reports strengthens the refutation's impact.

Overall, integrating counterarguments and refutations requires strategic placement within the essay. Many writers insert these sections after establishing their main argument or at logical transitional points, often before the conclusion, to reinforce their position. Others may distribute multiple counterargument and refutation pairs throughout the paper to systematically address potential objections. This approach not only demonstrates critical thinking but also anticipates and neutralizes opposing views, thereby strengthening the overall persuasive power of the essay.

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