Quotes And Attribution Quiz: Using The Rules About Quotation

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Using the rules about quotations in the Newsgathering & Interviewing and Course AP Stylebook lectures, correct the errors in these quotations.

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In the realm of journalism and academic writing, proper attribution and quotation punctuation are essential for clarity, credibility, and adherence to style guides. The AP Stylebook, in particular, provides specific rules for punctuating quotations, integrating attribution smoothly, and maintaining grammatical correctness. This paper examines various quotations with errors and demonstrates how to correct these according to AP style, emphasizing the importance of accurate attribution, proper punctuation, and clarity in reporting.

The first quotation reads: "This is the hardest class I've ever taken. It's also the most rewarding. The teacher sets the bar high and I think that forces us to learn more," said Joe Smith, a senior, of Journalism 201. According to AP style, the quotation marks are correct, but the attribution should be formatted properly. When the attribution follows the quotation, it is preceded by a comma within the quotation marks, and the attribution begins with a lowercase letter unless it is a proper noun. Additionally, the phrase "of Journalism 201" is better integrated. The corrected version should read: "This is the hardest class I've ever taken. It's also the most rewarding. The teacher sets the bar high, and I think that forces us to learn more," Joe Smith, a senior in Journalism 201, said.

The second quotation involves Gretchon Davies: "Gretchon Davies, a senior communications studies major, is taking three online courses this semester while she works full time." Since this is an attribution within the sentence and not a direct quote, it needs no quotation marks. Alternatively, if it is meant to be a direct quote, punctuation should be adjusted accordingly, but context suggests a paraphrase. Therefore, it should be: Gretchon Davies, a senior communications studies major, is taking three online courses this semester while she works full time.

The third quotation: "I couldn't possibly attend three classes in person every week." University College said it will begin offering journalism classes online this fall. The quotation itself is correct; however, the attribution must follow AP style. Since this is a straightforward attribution, it should be formatted as: "I couldn't possibly attend three classes in person every week," University College said that it will begin offering journalism classes online this fall.

The next sentence involves Marty Jennings: "Marty Jennings, a senior, feels University College should offer all of its courses online." Again, this appears to be an attribution plus a quote. Proper formatting would be: "Marty Jennings, a senior, said he feels that University College should offer all of its courses online." or, if the quotation is a direct statement, ensure punctuation is correct and attribution follows AP style.

When asked if she likes the virtual classroom better than the traditional one, junior Ally Anderson said, "I like the flexibility that taking an online course gives." This is correctly punctuated with the comma before the quotation and the attribution following the quote in lowercase: "I like the flexibility that taking an online course gives," Ally Anderson, a junior, said.

The sentence: "University College students may earn a their college degrees without ever setting foot on campus, thanks to the 'virtual' classroom." The quotation marks around "virtual" are correct as part of the sentence. The phrase "a their" is a grammatical error; it should be either "a" or "their." The corrected version: University College students may earn their college degrees without ever setting foot on campus, thanks to the "virtual" classroom.

Next, Susan Richards states: "Sometimes I submit my homework in the middle of the night", said Susan Richards, an English major. Proper punctuation requires the comma after the quotation, and the attribution should follow the quote without "said" inside quotation marks. Also, the comma should be inside the quotation marks according to AP style. Therefore: "Sometimes I submit my homework in the middle of the night," Susan Richards, an English major, said.

In the statement: "Online education is a very, very, very, very good way to go to college if you are a parent or if you work full time," said Cheryl Taylor, a sophomore and the mother of three boys. The quote is punctuated properly, but the excessive use of "very" could be stylistically reconsidered; nonetheless, punctuationally, it is acceptable.

The quotation: "The Internet is so versatile," exclaimed Brad Bradey, a computer sciences instructor. The punctuation is correct, but style suggests "exclaimed" is acceptable; in AP style, the exclamation mark would replace the comma if present, but here it is "exclaimed," which is a reporting verb, and the punctuation within the quote is fine.

Finally, the sentence: "10. The potential of online course work is enormous said Assistant Dean Joseph James." This is missing punctuation and proper attribution formatting. It should be corrected to: "The potential of online coursework is enormous," Assistant Dean Joseph James said.

In conclusion, correct use of quotations and attributions is vital for clarity and professionalism in journalism. The rules involve proper punctuation placement, integrated attribution, avoiding grammatical errors, and accurate attribution. Adhering to the AP Stylebook guidelines ensures that quotations are presented clearly, attribution is correctly formatted, and the overall readability of news reports is maintained.

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