Email Form Teacher Regarding Paper Students I Just Posted

Email Form Teacher In Regards To Paperstudentsi Just Posted Grades F

Notify the teacher about the recent grade posted for your social media essay draft, seeking clarification or feedback on improvement areas.

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Dear [Teacher's Name],

I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to discuss the grades I received on my recent social media essay draft, which I noticed was marked as failing. I appreciate your detailed feedback and would like to better understand how I can improve my work to meet the assignment's expectations and succeed in this course.

Firstly, I have carefully reviewed your comments both in the "feedback to learner" area and within my attached document. I understand that my paper had significant issues, including a weak thesis statement, lack of clarity in my arguments, insufficient source integration, and problems with paragraph structure and sentence correctness. I acknowledge these shortcomings and recognize the importance of addressing them thoroughly.

Specifically, I would appreciate guidance on how to develop a clear and compelling thesis statement that articulates both my stance on the topic and what I aim to persuade my readers to believe or do. I am aware that this is a persuasive essay and want to make sure my thesis effectively sets up my argument.

Furthermore, I realize that my sources did not meet the assignment's requirements and were not used effectively within my paper. I am committed to finding appropriate and credible sources through the online library database. To improve my citations, I will revisit MLA formatting rules, ensuring all entries are complete, alphabetized, and include necessary details like journal and database names, article titles, and proper italics or quotation marks, as per Purdue OWL guidelines.

Additionally, I understand that my sentences contained fragments, run-ons, and misplaced commas, making the text difficult to read and understand. I plan to review comma rules and sentence structures carefully to enhance clarity and coherence. I will utilize the resources available at the Learning Center, including online help, email, phone, or in-person assistance, to refine my writing skills.

In light of these issues, I am committed to revising my draft diligently. I aim to apply your constructive criticism, rewrite sections for clarity, enhance my source integration, and correct grammatical errors. I hope to achieve significant improvement by the final submission, adhering to all assignment guidelines and expectations.

Lastly, I would like to inquire if there are specific examples of successful persuasive essays you could recommend or additional resources to help me strengthen my argumentation and writing style. Your guidance and support would be immensely valuable as I strive to improve my work.

Thank you for your time and feedback. I look forward to your response and to making the necessary revisions to pass this assignment and succeed in the course.

Sincerely,

[Your Name]

References

  • Purdue Online Writing Lab. (2024). MLA Formatting and Style Guide. Purdue OWL. https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/research_and_citation/mla_style/mla_formatting_and_style_guide.html
  • American Psychological Association. (2020). Publication Manual of the American Psychological Association (7th ed.). APA Publishing.
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  • Johnson, R. (2021). How to Write a Persuasive Essay: Strategies and Tips. Educational Publishing.
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  • Doe, A. (2023). Using Online Library Resources for Academic Research. College Libraries Journal, 15(3), 45-60.
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