Project 2 WR 227 – Spring 2014 Due: Thursday, April 24

Project 2 WR 227 – Spring 2014 Due: Thursday, April 24 (complete rough draft)

Revise the attached document to improve its usability for its audience and purpose. You should assume the audience will read the document once when they first receive it; then they will keep it available for quick reference. As with Project 1, you should revise sentences and content; however, you should also make significant changes to the document’s design. These design changes should improve the document’s usability.

Audience: Veterinary assistants. You should assume your audience knows how to perform the listed procedures (taking the pet’s heart rate, for example).

Paper For Above instruction

The original document serves as a set of guidelines for checking in small animals at a veterinary clinic. To enhance its usability for veterinary assistants, a clear, concise, and well-structured document must be developed, emphasizing effective page design and clarity for quick reference.

Effective communication in a veterinary setting requires clarity, brevity, and an organized layout that allows assistants to access information swiftly. This paper aims to revise the initial guidelines by improving sentence structure, eliminating redundancy, and employing visual aids such as headings, bullet points, and appropriate font choices that align with best practices for professional documents. The goal is to create a user-friendly guide that complements the assistants' familiarity with procedures while streamlining their workflow.

Design and Content Revision Strategies

The document’s redesign should begin with an overarching structure that segments procedures by animal type: dogs, cats, and exotics. Each section should clearly list step-by-step instructions, including preparation, handling, measurements, questions to ask, and notes for documentation. Using headings and subheadings creates a logical hierarchy that guides the reader seamlessly through the process.

Whitespace, or the space between sections, improves readability and prevents clutter. Adequate spacing between paragraphs and bullet points allows assistants to quickly scan and find relevant steps. Choosing a clean, professional font such as Arial or Calibri at a 12-point size ensures legibility.

Lists should be used extensively to bullet key procedures, such as the measurements to take or the questions to ask owners. This facilitates rapid reference during busy clinic hours. For example, under each animal type, list the steps to follow, instruments needed, and specific checks.

Concise and Effective Sentence Construction

Revising sentences involves speaking directly to the reader, using active verbs and pronouns, and removing unnecessary words. For example, instead of “The files will be under the registered owner's last name and the pet's first name,” consider “Locate the pet’s file by owner’s last name and pet’s first name.”

Similarly, instructions like “Ask the owner if the dog is up-to-date on heartworm pills, and note the answer on the form,” could be shortened to “Ask if the dog’s heartworm medication is current and record the response.”

Sample Revised Procedure Section for Dogs

Handling the Dog: Ensure the dog is on a leash. If not, attach one from the clinic’s supplies. Lead the dog to exam rooms one, two, or three.

Measurements and Checks:

• Record heart rate and weight
• Check abdomen for lumps or pain
• Assess eyes and ears
• Inspect skin for fleas, ticks, rashes

Owner Questions: Ask if the dog’s heartworm prevention is current. Note their response. Address any owner questions if comfortable; otherwise, record them for the veterinarian.

Visual and Content Enhancements

Incorporating icons or symbols for urgent steps, such as a stethoscope icon for health checks, can guide the assistant efficiently. Color-coding sections (e.g., green for general procedures, red for critical checks) enhances visual distinction. Using bolded headers and consistent font styles further improves navigation.

Conclusion

Improving the original check-in guidelines involves not only refining sentence clarity but also redesigning the layout to serve veterinary assistants in a fast-paced environment. Clear headings, lists, whitespace, and visual cues will facilitate quick, accurate, and confident procedures, ultimately benefiting both staff and animal care outcomes.

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