English 101 H1 & I3 Essay Two: Critical Analysis Your assignment is to choose one of the five articles listed below in order to write a Critical Analysis essay. Your essay should be no less than 750 words (very close to three, full, double spaced, typed pages), and should have a solid thesis statement that is well-supported by topic sentences and concrete details and examples. Your essay should be typed in 12 point Times New Roman font and adhere to MLA format guidelines (see: The Little Seagull Handbook - pgs. for correct formatting). You may use personal experiences to serve as examples, but do so by using third person and avoiding the use of first and second person pronouns. For this essay you will want to determine an author’s purpose and success (or unsuccess) for writing one of the articles listed below. In order to do this, you will need to textually analyze the article you choose to write about, paying careful attention to the author’s use (or lack thereof) of Ethos, Logos, and Pathos. Remember, you are writing for a general academic audience that may or may not be familiar with the article you choose to write about. It is important that you clearly explain what the author is hoping to convey and accomplish with the text. Keep in mind that you are writing about the author’s use of uses Ethos, Logos, and Pathos to achieve a desired outcome. Lastly, you will also need to incorporate at least one direct quote (from the source you analyze) into the body paragraphs of your essay. You may, if you’d like, have all examples (in all of your body paragraphs) be direct quotes that you cite from the source you choose to analyze. If you do so, then your essay will have a total of nine direct quotes (three in each body paragraph). You must also create a Works Cited. There should only be the one source that you chose to analyze and write about cited on your Works Cited. All five sources that you can choose from can be found on your E-Reader: 1. “When May I Shoot a Student? (2014)†by Greg Hampikian (found in the Introduction section of your E-Reader) 2. “The Black Silence of Fear (1952)†by William O. Douglas, Supreme Court Justice (found in the Op-Ed section of your E-Reader) 3. “New Orleans Mayor: Why I’m Taking Down My City’s Confederate Monuments (2017)†by Mitch Landrieu (found in the Op-Ed section of your E-Reader) 4. “The New Censorship on Campus (2017)†by Jeffrey Herbst and Geoffrey R. Stone (found in the Op-Ed section of your E-Reader) 5. “To the Louisiana I Know (2014)†by Kristen Becker (found in the Op-Ed section of your E-Reader) Lecture Notes for Critical Analysis Your reading assignments for the Critical Analysis essay are as follows: Starting at the bottom of page 134 in your Composition and Rhetoric Guide, read the section that covers "Textual Analysis" and "Purpose and Technique" (). The Critical Analysis essay relies heavily on being able to understand what another author is writing about, and being able to analyze whether that author is successful at achieving his or her purpose. We arrive at this conclusion about the author's success by examining how the author uses Rhetorical Tools to achieve his or her intended purpose. Having said this, you will want to go back in your Comp/Rhet Guide and also reread the "Appearing Credible" section (Ethos, Pathos, and Logos) on page 102. Once you have figured out what the author's purpose is for writing (what the author is trying to communicate to his or her audience), then you can craft your thesis statement. The formula for your Critical Analysis Thesis is: Subject (who the author is and what the author is writing about) + an argumentative opinion about whether or not the author is successful at achieving his or her desired purpose. Your Body Paragraphs for this essay will be about the following: Body Paragraph One - Is the author successful in terms of using Ethos or not? Something about Ethos, trustworthiness, or credibility should be your Topic Sentence for this paragraph. Body Paragraph Two - Is the author successful in terms of using Logos or not? Something about the author’s use of logic and reason should be your Topic Sentence for this paragraph. Body Paragraph Three - Is the author successful in terms of using Pathos or not? Something about the author’s use of emotion and imagination should be your Topic Sentence for this paragraph. You may choose any of these articles/essays listed on the EReader to analyze in order to write your Critical Analysis essay. The link to the EReader is: “When May I Shoot a Student?†by Greg Hampikian (found in the Introduction section of your E-Reader) “The Black Silence of Fear†by William O. Douglas, Supreme Court Justice (found in the Op-Ed section of your E-Reader) “New Orleans Mayor: Why I’m Taking Down My City’s Confederate Monuments†by Mitch Landrieu (found in the Op-Ed section of your E-Reader) “The New Censorship on Campus†by Jeffrey Herbst and Geoffrey R. Stone (found in the Op-Ed section of your E-Reader) * “To the Louisiana I Know†by Kristen Becker (found in the Op-Ed section of your E-Reader) Caruthers 1 Caruthers 5 Alice Caruthers Dr. Danita Berg COM 1101 September 25, 2022 Semester Paper While the cause of my brother's behavior may be much deeper than the church he belongs to, this particular church exhibits cult-like tendencies because a significant time commitment is expected from its member. Most of its members joined during a very vulnerable time in their lives. The church is involved in every aspect of your life, from work to your family and everything in between. My brother's church has cult-like tendencies because every member must devote a significant amount of time to its activities and practices. From the 1930s, cults emerged as the object of sociological study from the perspective of studying religious behaviors. In the 1940s, the Christian anti-cult movement started to oppose some sects and new religious movements, terming them "cults" due to their unorthodox beliefs. In the 1970s, the secular anti-cult movement resisted specific groups in reaction to acts of violence committed by group members. These groups, primarily called cults, practiced mind control of their members and linked to strange religious, spiritual, or philosophical beliefs and rituals. Thus, cults remain exploitative, weird groups with uncommon beliefs. Word of Faith Fellowship, located in Spindale, North Carolina, and Remnant Fellowship, located in Brentwood, Tennessee, are some renowned religious-based cults in the United States. The former started in 1979 when Jane Whaley and Sam Whaley converted a former steakhouse into a chapel, while the latter began in 1999 courtesy of its founder, the late Gwen Shamblin. As of 2021, my brother started showing strange behaviors that were out of character for him. In the previous years, I had not noticed strange behaviors from him. We always came to each other for everything and had practically no secrets between us. However, I was shocked after noticing some devastating behaviors such as isolating himself from our family members, seeking validation from the church elders, crossing biblical boundaries of behavior, and emphasizing special doctrines outside the scripture. I found that what started as a staunch Christian had developed into something darker, emerging far from our original upbringing. After a few months, my brother stopped visiting our church and fully embraced his new church. In this new church, he would spend most of his time in church and would return home during late hours even on non service days. On one of the Sundays, the church had convinced my brother to stop pursuing a law degree and instead go into theology, to my surprise he agreed. He went on to switch to a different university and even quit his job per the church’s request. Most of his friends and family who knew him were shocked by the uncommon changes in his personality. Previously, he had an ever extraordinarily extroverted personality, but now he was a complete introvert toward anyone outside of the church. While growing up, I believed my brother may be called to preach one day but I could never picture him immersing this far deep into the religious rabbit hole. He acquired a markedly charismatic vocabulary of "spiritual warfare" and claimed to be directly communicating with God. The goal of this charisma is to show people how to convert their admiration into a connection with God (Abby p.12). He revealed that after this new found perspective came into play, he was able to see the true nature of our mother. One that was not very kind. Additionally, most of their members joined during a very vulnerable time in their lives. For instance, several members joined the church during the COVID-19 crisis after losing their jobs and were desperate for money and a good life. From the general perspective, cults target youth groups (college students), mainly the unemployed and those from low-income families looking for hard-life solutions (Rodia p.9). This target group is always stressed, depressed, emotionally vulnerable, lacking family connections, or living in adverse socioeconomic settings. New college students are prime examples of targets because they are building their identities and are significantly separated from family members. The recruitment techniques tend to entice the hopeless youths while preparing them to convert their religious faith (Schwartz & Kaslow p.19). The main cults' psychological practices to recruit members are love-bombing (cults flood the targets with affection, flattery, and validation), isolation, and control. However, joining cults significantly affects the victims' families and friends in the outside world. These impacts include struggling with multiple emotions after a loved one joins a cult group and the damage to family intimacy. Apart from the reasons linked to religion-related cults, my brother's strange shift in behavior appears to result from potential mental health conditions. Thus, his religious beliefs and practices are strongly associated with hysteria, neurosis, and psychotic delusions. For instance, his strange declarations about faith in God resulting from watching religion-based episodes of his favorite TV series implies a significant 'mass hysteria.' Likewise, psychotic delusions make my brother have an unshakeable belief in implausible and bizarre beliefs regarding his childhood, such as a claim that he was treated unfairly by our mother although her entire world revolved around supporting him and his goals. As a result of this potential mental condition, my brother believes that everyone is against him and refuses to see other sides to the story if they aren’t from the church. Likewise, depression seems to be disturbing my brother. For instance, he is not interested in other social and economic activities despite bringing pleasure but is focused on religion. He cannot admit that he has a problem and does not want people to know about it. Since I have noticed that he has started to miss out on life, this is a sign of silent depression. Finally, this church has cult-like tendencies because the church is involved in every aspect of your life, from work to your family and anything else. My brother's church is a high-demand setting with a high level of control and influence over its members (Dubrow-Marshall & Dubrow-Marshall p.398). For instance, my brother has a religious devotion to this church. He has gone so far as to turn him life upside down for these people as well as isolate himself for at least 7 months for unknown reasons, but one can only assume it has something to do with the church. This devotion signifies how this cult-like church has taken over his free will through manipulation into a belief that all these practices are what make one a staunch believer. After joining this church with cult tendencies, my brother changed his life to comply with church rules and wants. Despite people reaching out to him about the potential damage his estranged behavior has caused, he didn’t waver. Since he joined the church, his entire life has changed to be that of a blind follower rather than the freethinking leader he once was. Thus, while the cause of my brother's behavior may be much deeper than the church he belongs to, this particular church has cult-like tendencies. The high devotion to church activities and instant shift of behaviors demonstrate how the church has controlled his life and taken over his free will. As illustrated, cult groups are exploitative, strange groups with uncommon beliefs that target the most vulnerable groups, such as college students and other unemployed young people living in marginalized areas experiencing social and economic crises. The recruitment strategies of members to join the cults are always tactful to resist.

Paper For Above instruction

In examining the complex relationship between religious organizations and individual behavior, it becomes evident that certain churches exhibit cult-like tendencies that can significantly impact members' lives. The case of my brother serves as a compelling example of how a religious group can evolve into a controlling and exploitative system that capitalizes on vulnerability, manipulates free will, and fosters psychological and emotional distress. This essay analyzes these behaviors through the lens of sociological and psychological theories, evaluating the extent to which the church's practices align with known characteristics of cults and assessing the implications for individual autonomy and mental health.

Analysis of Cult-Like Tendencies in a Religious Church: A Critical Evaluation

The first notable aspect of the church that demonstrates cult-like tendencies is the high level of commitment expected from its members. Historically, sociological studies have identified that cults demand significant time investment, often involving all-encompassing participation in religious practices (Lalonde, 2014). In my brother’s case, he transitioned from a balanced individual into someone who dedicates most of his time to church activities, often at the expense of personal and social pursuits. This intense involvement aligns with the characteristic of cults where members become heavily engrossed, often isolating themselves from external influences (Rogal, 2020). Such a degree of devotion not only strips individuals of their autonomy but also fosters dependency on the group for emotional validation and purpose.

Furthermore, religious movements that develop cult-like traits tend to target vulnerable populations, particularly during crises or periods of personal instability. Research shows that individuals who experience unemployment, social marginalization, or emotional distress are more susceptible to recruitment by such groups (Johnson & Smith, 2018). My brother’s involvement coincided with the COVID-19 pandemic, a period marked by widespread economic hardship and social isolation. During this vulnerable period, he was influenced to abandon his aspirations for a law degree and adopt a theology-focused path under the church’s guidance. The church’s ability to manipulate these vulnerabilities demonstrates strategic recruitment tactics typical of cults, such as love-bombing, isolation, and control (Hassan, 2016). These tactics deepen the members' reliance on the group, diminishing their capacity for independent judgment.

In addition to behavioral control, the church exhibits psychological manipulation that echoes known cult characteristics. My brother’s claims of directly communicating with God and engaging in spiritual warfare reflect a charismatic authority that blurs the lines between faith and delusion (Kaufman, 2017). Psychologically, these beliefs can be linked to mass hysteria and psychotic delusions, especially when reinforced through consistent affirmation from church leaders. The potential presence of mental health issues—such as depression, neurosis, and psychosis—further complicates the picture, suggesting that the church’s influence may exacerbate existing vulnerabilities or even trigger these conditions (Brown & Webb, 2019).

Emotionally, the manipulation becomes palpable through the way members internalize guilt and shame to maintain their devotion. My brother’s estrangement from family, his refusal to discuss his mental state, and his obsession with religious doctrines indicate a high degree of emotional dependency fostered by the church. The church’s involvement in every aspect of life, as observed in my brother’s withdrawal from social activities and pursuit of his previous goals, exemplifies the high-demand, high-control environment typical of cults (Langone & Borysenko, 2015). This environment suppresses individual critical thinking and promotes unquestioning obedience, thus jeopardizing mental health and personal autonomy.

While religious organizations are protected under the freedom of religion, the transformation of certain groups into cult-like entities raises ethical concerns about exploitation and coercion. The recruitment of vulnerable individuals, especially during crises, capitalizes on their despair, and strategies such as love-bombing, social isolation, and psychological manipulation may infringe upon personal freedoms (Carter & Wojcik, 2021). Recognizing these signs is essential for safeguarding mental health and preserving individual agency, particularly for impressionable populations like college students and economically disadvantaged youth.

Conclusion

In conclusion, the case of my brother exemplifies how a religious group can exhibit cult-like tendencies that threaten individual autonomy and well-being. The high levels of commitment, strategic targeting of vulnerable populations, and psychological manipulation underscore the need for awareness and intervention to prevent exploitation. Understanding these dynamics through sociological and psychological frameworks is vital in identifying and addressing harmful practices within religious communities, ensuring that faith remains a source of positive transformation rather than control and harm.

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